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.A Touch of Love. by mmmaoh .A Touch of Love. by mmmaoh
Hi guys! More BL for you to enjoy~<3
Took me forever since it's been a long time since I drew something complete. I had to redraw it a few times and got really annoyed of it. My laptop lagged like crazy too so coloring was super annoying! I'm glad it's finished now ugh finallyyyyy
my guys are sooo lanky...ughhhh oh well okay i'll stop complaining now

Hope you like it! See you again soon ;P
:heart:*beautiful-shinigami

Please do not steal or use.
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So...
actually the first thing i noticed were the entangled fingers. The seme holding his uke's hand, as if both holding him in place, and also comforting him.
But actually, the most intimate and intensive fact about that, is that it's not the seme grabbing the uke's whole hand, but their fingers are intertwined, which makes it look mutual. It's also the uke grabbing the seme's hand for comfort, and the seme, strong and protective granting him that.
in german there is the expression 'jemanden in der Hand haben' which would be translated as holding someone in one's hand. You say this, if someone would do something for the other, if he or she asked for it.
It's something like an expression for another person's dedication, and even if it's somewhat associated with negative thoughts in german, I think here, it fits perfectly.
This is the seme, holding his uke and the uke gives himself to his lover. In german selfless love may sometimes be considered as foolish, and I think in some ways it really is foolish.
But here, even if it looks that way to me, it is just perfect.

What's else to say about this picture, is that the pleasure is obvious on the uke's face, blushing, his eyes closed, lips parted as if he's just about to let out a faint moan.

The seme nibbling on the uke's neck. Sure, exposing one's neck to someone else is an act of deep trust, since that area is really sensitive.
Again I see, that it's mutual, the uke doesn't look, as if he's trying to get out of the situation (left alone the title also implies, that this is a mutual thing)
But still, there is that uke-ish shyness in the uke's posture, trying to cover his breast with the free arm.
It's usually a defensive action, crossing one's arms to protect oneself, that's just normal body-language.
But here it fits and doesn't make this seem violent, as it could have, since i've seen enough of other examples.
anyway.
Also, both have their eyes closed. while I think, that it also shows one's trust to someone else, to turn one's back on the other, without protecting oneself. it's the same with closed eyes. even more, it's both of them experiencing this intimate act with their finest senses.

Let's get to the topic of clothing.
this is a little cliche. the dark haired, japanese uke with his ever so sexy disheveled kimono or yukata and the strong, (blonde) western seme.
yeah.

the rest of the room looks somewhat western to me, so here the uke's clothing adds a little taste of an exotic and erotic feeling.

overall colors.
they're so gentle, so smooth. I'm really sensitive to harsh and strong colors. So here i think the colors are beautifully chosen. They depict this gentle love, that's no mad craving for each other, only in a carnal-desire-way.
this looks even more intimate.
at least to me.

all in one, the picture shows what's to be shown, not loosing the eye for beauty and details. It's a beautiful composition, putting the lovers in the center of the picture, since they are the most important thing in this artwork.
it's in a way elegant, not using too many patterns, but that doesn't make it boring. it's stylish.

There's nothing left to say, I sincerely admire you and your work!
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GayStudent Featured By Owner May 7, 2015
Makes me just want to wriggle with giddy joy, just looking at this. X)
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Khoriana Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2015  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
I think this is so beautiful :D
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Thelastharbour Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2015  Student Traditional Artist
Beautiful,
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shiranui1295 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
so beautiful, this one :3 and sensual~~~ I love it Llama Emoji-23 (Shyness) [V1] 
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BeautifulAllah Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014
This might be a sin to allah
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MagicMoon37 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2014
Oh my. He's so shy, I feel body language for the one being kissed or biting on the neck. I like those lips you do on the guys in the pictures you do. Nice.
That light pink blush tone under his eyes closed, gives him the beauty. I like it. He's like "Oh".Heart 

I'm gonna add this to favorites if that's alright?
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AnimaMusic Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2014  Student Traditional Artist
LOVEYasuko Takasu (Fangirling) [V1] 
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animefreak4277 Featured By Owner Sep 9, 2014  Student General Artist
Ahh!!! Love this! I love, love, love neck kisses so...extra points. ^^
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NYJack Featured By Owner Edited Sep 3, 2014
This is very beautiful artwork of guys in love and how the Seme is being protected about his delicate Uke.
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:iconnyjack:
NYJack Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2014
Very sweet paring.
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:iconveryren:
veryren Featured By Owner Aug 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
very beautiful >///< sweet one!!!! Heart love your workHeart 
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SydneyitsSydneyYo Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Oh my~FREE flying hearts Icon
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Cherry-Maggy Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
can i know their name ?!Heart bum 
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Cherry-Maggy Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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I-LOL-at-you Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014
So much pink.....
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YourAngelDora Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
That's hot,and cute^^.Totally love it,for Real :D !!!!!
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LOKKIS-KROLL Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
weeell i think it's more then only a "touch" :D hahaha reat pic ^^
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puszek17 Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
wow you are really talented :D
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Shimindesu Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cute :)
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xXJet01Xx Featured By Owner Oct 1, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
The graphics are just beautiful~~!Very nice artwork^w^!
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2minnieyah Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
beautifurrrrrrrrrrrrr
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yahi-megpoid Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
WOOOOW <3
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KitsuneNekoTigi Featured By Owner Sep 3, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Squee you make such beautiful artwork!
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InSearchOf101 Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2013  Student Interface Designer
sweet
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:iconplaidandchains:
PlaidAndChains Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
BeAuTiFuL~! What did you use to color by chance, love~?
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:iconmmmaoh:
mmmaoh Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist
I use paint tool sai
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DevilsZero Featured By Owner Jul 30, 2013
These legs :iconinuheheheplz: i want these legs  :iconinucryplz: I would run like this :iconhappyskipplz: But it is only in my imagination :iconfinallyplz: DX
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nerdvsotaku Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
OMG!!! you just made my day!LMFAO kitty  and the uke is so cute and sexy.........huunnnggggsigh  thank youbunneh icon3 
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DevilsZero Featured By Owner Nov 3, 2013
^w^ yayy, thank you too.
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:iconbluekarou:
BlueKarou Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013  Student Photographer
You made me laugh. Thank you for that.
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DevilsZero Featured By Owner Oct 6, 2013
Ayee, thank you *///*
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PlaidAndChains Featured By Owner Aug 3, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I absolutely love this comment XDDD
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FoxMaiden04 Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
So beautiful... how'd you do the coloring and shading?
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tierrayaoi Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2013  Student Artist
so hot
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KurushimiFutago Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Very nice~ You color so beautifully~~

FuK~u
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Cool7days Featured By Owner Jul 6, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
THIS IS EXTREMELY SEXYYY!! :iconwantplz: ;D
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Scootie-chan Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
*looks*
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*dead*
xD
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bishyguy Featured By Owner Jul 2, 2013
So erotic! Well worth putting up with the laptop problems!
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shadowluver95 Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2013  Student General Artist
It's so amazing! The pose is just beautiful and enticing! I love it!
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Selfmoros Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
The position is nicely entangled
^_~
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schro71 Featured By Owner Jun 27, 2013
It is beautiful
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Lucy-Black-Rose Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
OMFG I almost shit meh pants when I saw dis it's faking AWWWWWESOME!! I WUV it!!! >////<
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Takahiro-Sonsaku Featured By Owner Jun 26, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
wow this is amazing
you can really feel the emotion and intensity of the picture
lots of passion
i love it :star:
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Usagi-Kai Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
holy shit this is sexy
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midna-fanatic Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
I've liked your work for a long long long time.

But this is by far my favorite piece of yours. Well done!
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WhiteLynx57 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
... When I'm done busting a blood vessel at this blatant display of smexy hotness... I have to ask which manga these two are from...
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Usagi-Kai Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
i think they're OCs
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WhiteLynx57 Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013
... Really? But, but... Damn! I'VE BEEN TRICKED! *runs away crying*
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moomoo-mi Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
AWWW! THATS TOO FREAKIN' CUTE!!!
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DemonicHate Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
soo perfect o3o T-T jealousy to the maxx
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